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A little intro to this spin off.This is a small spin off for those of us who are looking for Mature content of SMITE.If you do not like content of this nature then please leave as this as nothing to do with the main story and will not change anything in it.If you wish to read then enjoy as this is purely for entertainment and I am not attempting to make this it's own series.I will also write more spin offs of this nature as time goes on and as I feel like it.Thank you for reading this short intro and enjoy the story.


On a warm spring day Jing Wei enjoys the day sitting on a tree
branch over a lake.There is a cool breeze blowing and a wonderful
smell in the air with all the blooming flowers.Jing Wei glides
off the tree branch next to the bank of the pond.

As Jing Wei removes her clothing she lays them on a tree branch
closer to the ground.She jumps into the lake and swims around.As
time passes Jing Wei swims to the bank and gets out of the water
and lays on the warm grass and enjoys the sun.

After some time passes the Norse god of love and romance,Scot
appears and greets Jing Wei.Flustered Jing covers herself quickly
but Scot assures her it's fine.Sitting down next to Jing Wei,Scot
looks out over the lake and looks to Jing Wei and says "It's a
very beautiful day out isn't it?"."Y-yes it is." Jing Wei
stutters.

Scot smiles and walks over to the tree Jing hung her clothes on
and he removes his and jumps into the lake."The water is nice and
warm." Scot remarks."Why don't you come in?".Jing thinks about it
for a moment then joins Scot in the lake.Swimming around Scot
dives deep into the lake.

Jing tries to follow him but she is not as good of a swimmer.2
minutes pass and Scot resurfaces.Looking at Jing he asks "You
dive for long?"."No,I never really practiced." she replies.Scot
points to the island in the middle of the lake "Let's swim over
there." he speaks.

Jing follows Scot to the island.Arriving at the island both Jing
and Scot come ashore and stand on the sand of the shore.Looking
around the island is small but big enough.They both lay on the
warm sandy shore.

Scot looks over to Jing and says "You aren't a great swimmer but
are you a good flyer?".Jing sits up and looks back at Scot and
says "Well yeah I can fly really well."."Then show me?" Scot asks.

As Jing stands up she gets ready to start flying.With a running
jump Jing takes to the air and flies around.Even going as far
as doing some tricks.After flying for a while Jing comes in to
land and she does so with grace.

As Jing lands Scot looks at her.She looks very young but in
reality both of them are hundreds of years old.But Jing still
looks very young and she is very beautiful.While not very tall
or developed she is still a beautiful young lady.

Jing notices Scot staring at her and blushes.Scot notices it and
asks "Is something wrong?"."N-no just...not used to...um this."
Jing replies."Not used to what?" Scot asks."Being um...nude
around other gods." Jing says.

"Well you have nothing to worry about you are absolutely
stunning." Scot exclaims.Jing blushes but is happy to hear Scot
say that.Scot stands up to stretch.Jing can't help but to look
at Scot's body but blushes and looks away.Scot notices this and
walks up to her and looks at her.

Scot clasps Jing's chin and looks her in the eyes.Smiling Scot
strokes Jing's cheek and leans in to kiss her.Jing is surprised
but accepting.Scot reaches down and grabs one of Jing's hands.

Scot gently gropes one of Jing's breasts as he does Jing's gasps
in shock but enjoys it.Jing nervously clasps her hands around
Scot's cock and gently strokes it.Scot smiles while looking at
Jing.Jing looks back and smiles at Scot.

Scot sits down and looks up at Jing as she gets on her knees and
continues to stroke Scot's cock.She looks up at Scot and leans
down and starts to lick his cock.Slowly she begins to suck on his
cock and Scot gently strokes one of Jing's cheeks.

As Jing finishes sucking on Scot's cock she looks up at him.Jing
blushes as she starts to crawl on him.Jing starts straddling Scot
as she looks down at him.Scot nervously asks "Are you sure?".As
Jing looks down she nods as she reaches down and grabs the base
of Scot's cock she guides it into place and she slowly lets it
penetrate her pussy.


Jing slowly starts to ride Scot's cock as Scot places his hands
on Jing's waist.As Jing takes all of Scot's cock inside of her.
Scot looking up at Jing stutters as he asks "D-does it hurt?".
Jing shakes her head as she keeps to slowly ride Scot.

As Jing starts to speed up a little Scot begins to relax.Jing
keeps speeding up a little at a time and she begins to moan.Scot
looks up at her and notices her enjoying it and starts to move
with her.Jing looks down at Scot blushing blood red and panting
but continues to moan.

Jing speeds up and starts to grind Scot's cock.Scot begins to moan
as well.Jing motivated by Scot's moaning speeds up more and starts
asking Scot to cum.Scot speaking in between his heavy breaths asks
"W-where do you want it?".Jing looking down says "...Inside of
me."

Scot surprised at what Jing said but still nods.A short time
passes and Jing is still riding Scot but Scot looks up at Jing and
says "I...I am close Jing.".Jing speeds up begging Scot to fill
her up.Scot holds down Jing's waist as he fills her up with his
cum.

Jing looks down at Scot smiling still panting and sweating as she
says "Thank you.".Scot looks at her smiling also panting and
sweating.Jing slowly gets off of Scot's cock and lays next to him
on the sand.

Time passes as both of them recover from their fun together.Jing
gets up and says "It's starting to get late.Maybe we should head
back and get dressed."."Sure...I'll race you!" Scot happily
exclaims.

After racing back to the other bank they both dry off and get
dressed."Well...I really enjoyed today and um...I will see you
later?" Scot says not sure of the right words.Jing looks at him
and says "Could I...maybe go home with you for tonight?".Scot
smiles and nods as Jing runs up to him and puts his arm over her.


If you made it this far then thank you!Thanks for reading the whole thing.I know it isn't very long but it did take me like 2-3 hours to write this whole thing(That's a long time for me!)so I am happy to finish my first spin off.Maybe this will motivate me to write the main story some more.This is the first time I have attempted to write mature content so I am sorry if it isn't perfect.But hopefully you enjoyed it and I will hopefully write more in the future! <3 

All characters in the story are 18 and older and I hold no copyright over any of the mention characters.
So the work on chapter 5 was slow and I am writing my first spin off.Work on both is going slow due to trying to keep it new and not repetitive but I will keep trying my best.Chapter 6 will hopefully be better and have more progress along with finishing my first spin off story.

I want to thank all of you who read all my entries and hopefully I can make more stories. <3
While Chang'e and Hel have been sitting on the bench the sky
began to cloud and it started to rain.Both Chang'e and Hel went
inside with the rest of the gods as Grover followed by Sylvannus
are running out to the Garden.Chang'e waved at Hel as she
went to the Chinese Lobby and Hel waved back as she went to the
Norse Lobby.The rainstorm quickly turned to the thunderstorm.

As Usual Thor and Chaac argued over who really brought the
thunder.Hel not caring for it went into the main Lobby.Most of the
gods would usually be all around the main Lobby.However today
there are a lot of minions moving around working on the new
outdoor training area due to the Fenrir incident.

The construction area is not open to gods for now but Hel can
see a lot of minions working hard even in the rain to complete
the new addition.Hel along with many other gods are happy to
see a proper training ground where they are allowed to properly
train.Since using most of their abilities is off limits inside
of the Lobby for gods but mostly minion and building safety.

Hel glides back to the Norse Lobby to see Thor and Chaac are
not there anymore.Relived Hel takes a seat in one of the fur
covered chairs.When the speakers come alive and all the gods
go silent the announcer speaks.

"Due to...unforeseen circumstances the Assault arena is being
repaired and until further notice all matches are suspended."

As the speakers go silent once again the gods resume their various
tasks and conversations.Hel looks at Odin as he takes a seat
"What did Loki do this time..."."It wasn't Loki this time.Janus
messed up his portal and destroyed the door." Odin replied.

Hel surprised that it wasn't Loki for once looks over at the table
and looks through the small pile of books and magazines laying
on there.She finds one small book called "Manny's adventures".But
before she can start reading it a minion approaches her holding
a tiny Fenrir by the scruff.

After the minions leave Hel puts Fenrir on the floor and he
scitters off.Hel decides to get up and heads to the main Lobby
to the food area.After having some baked potatos steeped in
chicken broth she goes towards the Garden.

Once arriving at the entrance to the Garden she can feel the
chilling moist air as the rain continues to pour.Hel looks out
to the Garden to see Sylvannus and Grover out in the rain.Poseidon
doesn't mind rain either.Hel doesn't understand what rain is since
it never rains in the Underworld.

Hel watches the rain for a while before heading back to the Norse
Lobby and as she enters she see's Odin sitting in his chair with
his face in his hand.As Hel glides over to her chair she see's
Ymir in the corner behind Odin eating crayons.Sitting back down in
her chair she looks at Odin.He is clearly angry and Hel decides
not to speak to him.

Some time passes and Hel looks around the Norse Lobby.It is the
usual.Dark stone flooring some stone pillars some furs on the
wall with a few mounted animals heads.There is a couple of chairs
padded with animal furs and some stone benches all light by some
torch chandeliers.

Around 2 in the day the speakers come alive once again.

"The Assault arena has been repaired and matches will resume
as scheduled."

Hel just waking up from a short nap heard the speakers and notices
Odin isn't in his chair anymore.Hel stretches and gets up.Leaving
the Norse Lobby Hel enters the main Lobby and as usual the sound
of the gods in their daily routine is near deafening.Gliding over
to the Garden entrance Hel can see the rain is gone.

Hel looks around for Chang'e but she isn't out here.She see's
Poseidon gliding on top of the pond as the Koi fish follow.Hel a
little discouraged sits down on one of the wooden benches and
watches Poseidon.

Some time passes more matches get called neither Hel nor Chang'e
have been picked all day.Rather bored Hel sighs and slumps.By now
Poseidon has already left the Garden.Fairly empty Hel sits alone.

Listening to the sound of the birds chirping and breeze blowing
Hel is relaxed and at ease.As Hel looks up into one of the trees
she can see Jing Wei sitting on one of the branches watching the
small birds fly about.

Jing Wei noticing Hel waves to her and Hel waves back.Hel decides
to get up and head into the Lobby.She glides over to the Training
Area to see all the minions working hard to complete it.Looking
around Hel can see a minion pushing a cart through the Lobby
that containing some potions.

As Hel is in the main Lobby the speakers turn on to announce the
message.

"The next match will be Sun wukong,Hel,Athena,Tyr and Chang'e
versus Hou Yi,Aphrodite,Ymir,Ao Kuang and Amaterasu.The match will
start in 15 minutes."

After hearing her name called Hel quickly glides to the Norse
Lobby to be ready to enter the Assault arena.Hel notices Tyr in
the Lobby with her ready to enter the portal.As the portal opens
they both step in and arrive in the Order fountain.
This is currently a placeholder.I am not writing in updates like in the main story.I am gonna write the whole thing all at once.Thank you for your patience. 

A little intro to this spin off.This is a small spin off for those of us who are looking for Mature content of SMITE.If you do not like content of this nature then please leave has this as nothing to do with the main story and will not change anything in it.If you wish to read then enjoy as this is purely for entertainment and I am not attempting to make this it's own series.I will also write more spin offs of this nature as time goes on and as I feel like it.Thank you for reading this short intro and enjoy the story.
Hel awakes in her cold stiff bed and quickly rises to get dressed
and ready to enter the Lobby.As she brushes her beautiful godlen
hair and eats a light breakfast she is ready to enter the portal
and join the other gods for another day of battle.Hel glides
across the misshapen terrain of the Underworld to the portal.

As Hel enters the portal she is suddenly brought into the Lobby.
Hel takes a moment to collect herself as the portal is very
jarring and can be hard to deal with.Once Hel regains her
composure she looks around the Lobby.It's the same old Lobby as
yesterday but there are more minions running about in a big
rush.

This morning the Lobby is quiet and peaceful without all of the
usual choas and noise from almost 80 gods and many more minions.
Gliding across the clean floor there is a loud and sudden thud,Hel
quickly turns to the sound as does the few gods and many minions.
It was Fenrir who finally came crashing back down in the same
hole ruining the progress of the construction minions and damaging
the stone floor of the Nordic side of the Lobby.

Being a healer and Fenrir's sister she glides over to him and
in a burst of light heals Fenrir.Hel lands to help Fenrir up
but after on his feet is quickly pursued by the construction
minions whose work was just destroyed.

Hel giggles as Fenrir runs away toward the garden to hide.But
she continues on.She moves to the buffet and see's the cooks
in the back preparing morning meals for the gods.The smells
overwhelming are all mixed but Hel can easily
smell her favorite,Beef stew with carrots and potatos.

Leaving the buffet and intoxication smells behind Hel returns
to the main area of the Lobby.Unlike other areas this side has
few decorations and none relating to a pantheon.Clean white tiles
cover the floor and there are a few potted plants and benches.

Looks up at the giant screen as it hangs high up on the wall but
low enough to read all that is on it.The screen tells the gods
what arena is being fought on for that day.It tells when matches
are played and has some empty spaces in the day for extra
matches or rest time for the gods.

After checking all the match times Hel moves on from the screen.
Gliding around the Lobby she see's more gods starting to
enter through the portal.Hel is happy to see Amaterasu enter the
Lobby well dressed and glowing with energy as usual.

Gliding over to greet Amaterasu she is noticed by her and both
exchange a formal greeting.They both sit down at one of the
tables to have breakfast.Hel having her favorite of Beef stew
with carrots and potatos and Amaterasu having steamed rice with
grilled fish fillets.

Amaterasu is the first to speak asking Hel "What are your thoughts
on the recent upcoming tournament?"."There is going to be a
tournament?I thought that was 2 months away." Hel replies.
"They moved it back for reasons unknown to me." Amaterasu states.

The 2 god team tournament was originally planned for 2 months
from now,Why they moved it back Hel could not understand.The
prize for both winners was clothing made from the finest
golden silk with blue accents that shimmered beautifully in the
light.This was a new addition to the tournaments to give motive
for the gods to fight harder and want to win.

"Who are you planning on teaming with?" Amaterasu asks."I was
thinking of asking Chang'e." Hel replies."You two would be
A formidable team." Amaterasu says with respect."What about you?"
Hel asks."I don't think I will take part in the tournament."
Amaterasu replies."Why not?" Hel pursues."I do not have anyone
to team with." Amaterasu replies.With feelings of guilt for asking
Hel goes back to eating.

After their breakfast both goddess' sit at the table in silence
as more gods enter the Lobby.Hel stands and says "I need to go
and find Chang'e and ask her to join me in the tournament.".
Amaterasu nods and goes her own way.

Hel glides around the Lobby looking for Chang'e but is unable to
find her.She glides towards the Chinese Lobby to look for her
but cannot find her.She asks Sun Wukong "Have you seen Chang'e
around here yet?"."No I haven't seen her this morning." he
replies.

Hel thinks to check to the dining area.Once Hel arrives she tries
to spot Chang'e but she couldn't find Chang'e even if she was
there for how many gods are there.

Baffled to where she could be Hel moves on to look elsewhere.
Thinking to check the Garden Hel quickly glides over.As Hel enters
the Garden she looks to the pond to see Chang'e sitting on the
bench nearby.

As Hel glides over she can feel the warmth of the sun and the
fresh air.Hel sits on the bench next to Chang'e and looks to her
"How are you this morning?".Chang'e replies with a small grin.
A few minutes pass as Hel and Chang'e sit in silence."Would
you...join me in the upcoming tournament?" Hel asks abruptly.
Chang'e looking surprised nods.

Hel can't help but to grin as she tries to hide it.Chang'e still
notices but pretends she doesn't.Hel gains her composure and looks
up to the pond.The glittering pond of clear blue water that has
a couple of Koi fish in it.Hel doesn't understand why the water
is so clear and clean as the water in the Underworld is dirty
and murky.

More time passes as the announcer's voice comes over the speakers
announcing the days first matches are being prepared.Hel stays
Seated with Chang'e both still sitting in silence until Hel
speaks "I wonder fi either of us will be called for a match
today.".Chang'e looks at Hel and gives a assuring smile.

As time passes the first match gets called over the speakers.
Zeus,Odin,Janus,Loki and Artemis V.S Osiris,Isis,Apollo,Xbalanque
and Zhong Kui.

"Odin should easily beat Isis" Hel states.Chang'e looks at Hel
and lightly shrugs.Meanwhile in the Assault match with the gods
spawning in Janus messed up his portal and accidently came through
Odin's door breaking it,Odin very angrily looks back yelling
"Oh asdammit." while Loki is hiding...in a boat.
A little intro to this spin off.This is a small spin off for those of us who are looking for Mature content of SMITE.If you do not like content of this nature then please leave as this as nothing to do with the main story and will not change anything in it.If you wish to read then enjoy as this is purely for entertainment and I am not attempting to make this it's own series.I will also write more spin offs of this nature as time goes on and as I feel like it.Thank you for reading this short intro and enjoy the story.


On a warm spring day Jing Wei enjoys the day sitting on a tree
branch over a lake.There is a cool breeze blowing and a wonderful
smell in the air with all the blooming flowers.Jing Wei glides
off the tree branch next to the bank of the pond.

As Jing Wei removes her clothing she lays them on a tree branch
closer to the ground.She jumps into the lake and swims around.As
time passes Jing Wei swims to the bank and gets out of the water
and lays on the warm grass and enjoys the sun.

After some time passes the Norse god of love and romance,Scot
appears and greets Jing Wei.Flustered Jing covers herself quickly
but Scot assures her it's fine.Sitting down next to Jing Wei,Scot
looks out over the lake and looks to Jing Wei and says "It's a
very beautiful day out isn't it?"."Y-yes it is." Jing Wei
stutters.

Scot smiles and walks over to the tree Jing hung her clothes on
and he removes his and jumps into the lake."The water is nice and
warm." Scot remarks."Why don't you come in?".Jing thinks about it
for a moment then joins Scot in the lake.Swimming around Scot
dives deep into the lake.

Jing tries to follow him but she is not as good of a swimmer.2
minutes pass and Scot resurfaces.Looking at Jing he asks "You
dive for long?"."No,I never really practiced." she replies.Scot
points to the island in the middle of the lake "Let's swim over
there." he speaks.

Jing follows Scot to the island.Arriving at the island both Jing
and Scot come ashore and stand on the sand of the shore.Looking
around the island is small but big enough.They both lay on the
warm sandy shore.

Scot looks over to Jing and says "You aren't a great swimmer but
are you a good flyer?".Jing sits up and looks back at Scot and
says "Well yeah I can fly really well."."Then show me?" Scot asks.

As Jing stands up she gets ready to start flying.With a running
jump Jing takes to the air and flies around.Even going as far
as doing some tricks.After flying for a while Jing comes in to
land and she does so with grace.

As Jing lands Scot looks at her.She looks very young but in
reality both of them are hundreds of years old.But Jing still
looks very young and she is very beautiful.While not very tall
or developed she is still a beautiful young lady.

Jing notices Scot staring at her and blushes.Scot notices it and
asks "Is something wrong?"."N-no just...not used to...um this."
Jing replies."Not used to what?" Scot asks."Being um...nude
around other gods." Jing says.

"Well you have nothing to worry about you are absolutely
stunning." Scot exclaims.Jing blushes but is happy to hear Scot
say that.Scot stands up to stretch.Jing can't help but to look
at Scot's body but blushes and looks away.Scot notices this and
walks up to her and looks at her.

Scot clasps Jing's chin and looks her in the eyes.Smiling Scot
strokes Jing's cheek and leans in to kiss her.Jing is surprised
but accepting.Scot reaches down and grabs one of Jing's hands.

Scot gently gropes one of Jing's breasts as he does Jing's gasps
in shock but enjoys it.Jing nervously clasps her hands around
Scot's cock and gently strokes it.Scot smiles while looking at
Jing.Jing looks back and smiles at Scot.

Scot sits down and looks up at Jing as she gets on her knees and
continues to stroke Scot's cock.She looks up at Scot and leans
down and starts to lick his cock.Slowly she begins to suck on his
cock and Scot gently strokes one of Jing's cheeks.

As Jing finishes sucking on Scot's cock she looks up at him.Jing
blushes as she starts to crawl on him.Jing starts straddling Scot
as she looks down at him.Scot nervously asks "Are you sure?".As
Jing looks down she nods as she reaches down and grabs the base
of Scot's cock she guides it into place and she slowly lets it
penetrate her pussy.


Jing slowly starts to ride Scot's cock as Scot places his hands
on Jing's waist.As Jing takes all of Scot's cock inside of her.
Scot looking up at Jing stutters as he asks "D-does it hurt?".
Jing shakes her head as she keeps to slowly ride Scot.

As Jing starts to speed up a little Scot begins to relax.Jing
keeps speeding up a little at a time and she begins to moan.Scot
looks up at her and notices her enjoying it and starts to move
with her.Jing looks down at Scot blushing blood red and panting
but continues to moan.

Jing speeds up and starts to grind Scot's cock.Scot begins to moan
as well.Jing motivated by Scot's moaning speeds up more and starts
asking Scot to cum.Scot speaking in between his heavy breaths asks
"W-where do you want it?".Jing looking down says "...Inside of
me."

Scot surprised at what Jing said but still nods.A short time
passes and Jing is still riding Scot but Scot looks up at Jing and
says "I...I am close Jing.".Jing speeds up begging Scot to fill
her up.Scot holds down Jing's waist as he fills her up with his
cum.

Jing looks down at Scot smiling still panting and sweating as she
says "Thank you.".Scot looks at her smiling also panting and
sweating.Jing slowly gets off of Scot's cock and lays next to him
on the sand.

Time passes as both of them recover from their fun together.Jing
gets up and says "It's starting to get late.Maybe we should head
back and get dressed."."Sure...I'll race you!" Scot happily
exclaims.

After racing back to the other bank they both dry off and get
dressed."Well...I really enjoyed today and um...I will see you
later?" Scot says not sure of the right words.Jing looks at him
and says "Could I...maybe go home with you for tonight?".Scot
smiles and nods as Jing runs up to him and puts his arm over her.


If you made it this far then thank you!Thanks for reading the whole thing.I know it isn't very long but it did take me like 2-3 hours to write this whole thing(That's a long time for me!)so I am happy to finish my first spin off.Maybe this will motivate me to write the main story some more.This is the first time I have attempted to write mature content so I am sorry if it isn't perfect.But hopefully you enjoyed it and I will hopefully write more in the future! <3 

All characters in the story are 18 and older and I hold no copyright over any of the mention characters.

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